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Woohoo, my first animation on dA! :w00t:
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First off, wonderful work on the emote's expression, the subtle animation in the tongue and eyes really make the screaming come out of the picture. The hands look really cartoony and is a great effect. As for the ghost, great expression, it certainly shows the ghost is pissed of and who wouldn't be if somebody was screaming at you. The ghost looks like it's really been emotified, but just a little too much. It looks a tad to blue and not like a cartoon. That does work well in a way, the emote looks cartoony and stupid and, while the ghost looks more realistic. I think the shading is overall good, but the animation looks a little rough, you should speed it up a little, but it's not bad for your first time.

Lots of ghost emotes tend to be longer, and involving emotes getting scared and running off, with lots of frames and fancy tricks. You've managed to keep it simple, and funny. Of course, it's overexaggeration, everybody overexaggerates when doing stuff like emotes, but this is not a bad thing, in fact you've pulled it off very nicely.

For you're first animation you've done well, you know what to do with the hands and how to expand the shadow. I won't go into the animation too much, since I'm not exactly a master and don't want to give off anything false. The only bit I could possibly think of to improve is try and make it a bit smoother.

The overall emote is funny to look at, the great big oversized scream from the emote and the "so I'm a ghost, get over it" expression from the ghost work well together and make me laugh. Not exactly the most usable emote in conversations, but who said it has to be. As long as it's a cute, funny and overall fun emote to look at, then it gets a pass from me! ;)

Also, one little thing, there is a white pixel just at the bottom of the ghost.
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p-koi Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2017  New Deviant
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:iconthelegendaryderp:
TheLegendaryDerp Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Unenthusiastic ghost is unenthusiastic. 😒
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:iconfat-butt:
Fat-Butt Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Orange blob: ZOMG A GHOST!!!!!!!!1 :nuu: 
Ghost: I don't have time for this...
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:iconlil-tanukii:
lil-tanukii Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD so funny
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:iconnoki234:
Noki234 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Can I use this as my avatar
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:iconpatchypantsu:
PatchyPantsu Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ghost: Dude, come on. Really?
Adorable emote n.n
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:iconroxy-chickr:
Roxy-ChickR Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Like me brother
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:iconii-edison-ii:
II-edison-II Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG a floating shopping list!
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:iconrenekosenpai7:
Renekosenpai7 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2016  Student General Artist
X3 spongebob!
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:iconh0wlingshewolf:
H0wlingSheWolf Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Guy: AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!! GHOST!
Ghost: ...What? 
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:iconmisakikagamine123:
MisakiKagamine123 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
orange man:ahhhhh! its a fuckin ghost!
ghost:ca'mon man tats not cool bro
orange man:
:dead: remake 
ghost:wtf is wrong withe him...
:unimpressed: 
                                                               ~THE  END~
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:iconperfectionchaosme:
PerfectionChaosMe Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Pacman Ghost! ^^
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:iconchrisstarkiller:
ChrisStarkiller Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013
GHOST!
GHOST!
GHOST!
GHOST!
Toast.
GHOST!
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:iconscarecrow2003:
scarecrow2003 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ghost Ghost :ghost: :ghost: Community Spirit Community Spirit
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lpsgurl2444 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :PizzaParty: Ghost Eating Collection.7 Summer Contest-Food Entry LOLTATO Mr. poop :poorguy: cutely avvi 2 :ilovebg: Popcorn Revamp la tastes good the biggest eater Fun cake Sushi Ride 
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lpsgurl2444 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Filmographer
Ghost WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :heartbroken: Community Spirit Ghost :ghostdance: ghost :ghostie: Moustache Theft :ghost: Dance With Ghost Avatar Scary Ghost new avi for Pet Ghost Ghost Bear Ghost Rider Ghostie 
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awesomefionna Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconghostplz:
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BlueUmbrellaGirl Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
haha :love:
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:iconadb-fantasy:
ADB-Fantasy Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Ghost is used to this. Now their reactions just bore him.
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:iconericcartman123:
ericcartman123 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012
funny
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:iconnami15:
Nami15 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's amazing!!
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:iconanimanga409:
Animanga409 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you!!
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:iconnami15:
Nami15 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!! :3
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KiraofTheInternet Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
I love their emote's expression. :XD:
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VioletBlaze56 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2012
thats hilarious
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:iconbloodpuffz:
BloodPuffz Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute!
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TokiBuni Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011
This needs a Daily deviation! :la: Its so awesome! Made me giggle for ages!!! :D
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Sombrisio Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
Spooooky! *faves*
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Dreamer-Girl852 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2011  Student Writer
I love this! The ghost is like: Ugh.. Another Manic?
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monster-eating-pie Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2011
I love it so much, if i was a member, ud get 5 stars from me :P
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KitsunesReign Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
omg this is too adorable X3 XD
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Ravenswd Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2010
I love the expression on the ghost's face. He's like, "Oh, great, another person freaking out..."
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Sushi-Ice-Cream Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2010
Yep. That's a good interpretation of me meeting a ghosty.

:dummy: NYUUH~
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BabyRuca Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi! :wave:
just stopping by to say this has been featured in Emotepalooza Vol. 2 :iconveryexcitedplz:
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:iconanimanga409:
Animanga409 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks so much for the feature! :love:
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:iconbabyruca:
BabyRuca Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no problem :)
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chibi-chocolate123 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2010
O O
O



AAAAAAAAAAAAH
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leiko7fox Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2010
i lol'd XD


BOO!!! :pumpkinn:
:ohnoes: *scream*
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Autoterminator Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
frickin adorable!!!
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JoyBundle012 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
super-epic-awesome-cuteness!! xD tee hee hee
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:iconczathero:
Czathero Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist
This is filled with Awesome Sauce!!
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:iconczathero:
Czathero Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist
This is filled with Awesome Sauce!!
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:iconinperfectioncreation:
Ahaha lol this is hilarous... i love it
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FrankieMonster Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2010
LOL
This is awesome xD
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PhantomReyne Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2010
woah this be awesome yo. though I can't tell if those red things are his hands waving up and down or just stars to show that he is having a panic attack.
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Synfull Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
Just to let you know this emote has been featured in the 99th volume of So i herd u liek emotes?? :iconhappydancerplz:
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:iconwild-spirit-wolfgirl:
make it a plz!!
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Maciozaur Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AaaaaXD
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:iconwild-spirit-wolfgirl:
lol awsome
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